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Ever Again!

I get slapped in the face and I'm told not to ever speak of this ever again.                      I get locked in my room and I get told to speak of it no more.    I get bossed around and I get told I should shut up and inure to all that's around.              I get hit all over my body and I'm told to speak this with nobody.                          I get put thru pain and I'm told not to ever speak of this ever again!

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  • AbundantBetrayals
    September 19
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    These are powerful words, but I do think you need to go back and revise it a bit. Keep up the emotion!
    ~Betrayals