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Against Winter's Smile

Sleeping within darkened kisses
love waits upon joy
to touch withered breath
against Winter's smile,

Letting time cradle beauty
in silent grains of hope
as anticipation captures
peace on the lonely wind

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  • kaibab silver member
    September 23
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    Thanks so much for your entry


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 21

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

    Winter does seem bleak and dreary for much of the time yet I find often a serene beauty in the cold, snow and blowing wind. 's


  • God of Thunder
    September 19
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    Very nice write. Such nice imagery giving hope to our souls. Thank you