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Eye of the hurricane

A break form life
A day of peace
Calm within the storm
Eager anticipation
of what is yet to come


Trees whisper secrets

Secrets of success
Nothing here nothing there
Just simply the day of rest

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  • crivanea silver member
    September 19

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    ohh..yes. that is true..friday is a day of rest..the centerpiece...lol...good job on hte title too..this is a good description for friday maybe the weekends are busy with screaming children lol


  • XRainbowliciousX
    September 19
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    I would put a comma where is says nothing here, nothing there. I love how peaceful this poem is and I love th title as well.