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Angelic Form of Beauty

 
Good morning sweet little angel

This is your welcome committee

Nanny has showed off your picture

I must say you're very pretty

You've made a grand entrance already

But that's what we women do

Spicy addition to your family

Chris, Alisha, Angus and you

Chris, now that's your daddy

He'll be your mighty hero

Alisha is your mommy

The best friend you'll ever know

Now Angus, that's your big brother

He's going to be your guard

He'll make you mad, but you'll be glad

That brother's you can't discard

Your name has a special meaning

Representing God's favor and love

Now that makes sense

For you're Heaven sent

Angelic beauty from above

Now Gracie, since you're so special,

For you is a lullaby

Mommy can sing it to you

When you get sleepy and cry



Rock the little angel Gracie

So beautiful and sweet

No more will she cry

Just sing the lullaby

She'll close her eyes and sleep

The sandman will bring her

Beautiful dreams

of Castles in purple and pink

Rock the little angel Gracie

So beautiful and sweet

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Happy Birthday Gracie

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  • sakari-angel
    September 28

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    Congratulations!
    Your work is amazing.
    "Alisha is your mommy, The best friend you'll ever know"
    I would have to say that this is one of my favorite parts, because I know the truth of it.


    • GuiltedShadow gold member
      September 28
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      Thank you. It is true. My daughters are my truest friends and vice versa.


  • lilangelsnemesis gold member
    September 24

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    Congratulations...

    Congratulations on your Gold Trophy this absolutely sweet! A true welcome to a new newborn on this magically world for babies. I loved the lullaby as well. I could imagine it being sung to heavy sleep eyes drifting off to slumber.

    lilangel'snemesis

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 23

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    This is absolutely beautiful in every word and way, thank you so much for your most lovely welcome, and for mentioning the whole family too, Josie


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 19

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    OMG sis. This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. So sweet. Best of luck in the contest.
    The only thing is, it is REALLY hard to read in that color of font.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


    • GuiltedShadow gold member
      September 19
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      I know I've changed it a million and 1 times. Think I should do the purple? Any suggestions?

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