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Wandering

Wandering through darkened chasms
My mind plays tricks on me
Inspiring me to run as fast as i can
To escape these dusty crevices
Of my imperfect, lonely,
                  Wandering, half-crazed mind

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 19

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    some good imagery you use in these lines - dusty crevices - in particular is very strong. good writing.