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Friday night lights have blown out

Really?

I imagined I'd have fared better

Dragging my feet by the heels
  like in the dance classes of old,
a ghost glowing with rage of a workweek
in a dark uninhabited building

The security lightbulb smirks at me
  in contempt?

Later there will be a liquor store,
  filled with the kind of obnoxious
only alcohol can encourage

Later still there will be peace

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  • crivanea silver member
    September 19

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    i really like that line about the lightbulb smirking haha...great personification here...nicely done..good imagery and word choice..solid write throughout