Just under Light in evening
Unfolds in now darkened hues of stark reds and golds.
Last night of Summer brings beholding mem'ries of
Inspiring desires of poems untold.
Even as approaches this Autumnal equinox, an odd balance of darkness and Light, so do her thoughts return to this quadrennial anniversary, four years 'fore this night.
Like a youthful field or meadow clearing our
Eyes would long to see and be contently satisfied,
In like manner have her written thoughts been
Given here, to we who've laughed, Loved, cried.
Her trials and aspirations, hopes and observations, Loves and nature, too--have brought much Joy to many, given pause to plenty, and formed this impromptu "Thank You".
Author notes
A random poet I happened upon, the content is based on what I could glean from her profile and in tribute to her anniversary.
A contest entry
- Celebrating 4 Years on All Poetry Contest by FloridaGatorQueen.
525 points, ended October 3, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites contest!!!!!!!!!!!! enter!!!!! by foreveryourslove.
1120 points, ended November 9, 1072 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very beautifully written. I just loved the wording. Thank you for writing this poem. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thanks for the HM...
I didn't want to point this out during the contest for fear of seeming like a brown-noser, but now that it's over, I wanted you to know each line starts with what was a letter of your AP name when the contest started. I actually do that with a lot of my tributes. Thanks also for your kind compliment.
Sincerely,
Marvin J. †
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