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Damaged Goods

Heavy darkness falls
as empty silence echoes
the dying pangs of broken spirit

with long sigh tear filled eyes
search in vainly to hope
for what once was
future... now lost

concealed the shadows despair
is life no longer worth
it's traveling

steps labor their tread
this path battered of time
weighed man's mind

bleeding fears play
their bitter truths
shredding last vestige
of  possibilities dreams

cold harshness of realities
scars deep
a weary soul
returned as
damaged goods

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Work in progress ....may change

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 20

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    excellent~

    For a work in progress
    I read and found it to be very good
    Be sure and let me know if you change it
    I got up some new ones hope you drop by
    Have missed you and hope all is well
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Rclane gold member
      September 23
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      So sorry to have missed you. Thanks for reading and commenting. I will catch up ASAP. Hoildays are here and I do work retail....forgive me if it takes a while