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Cold

Cold is still
Cold drains you
Cold pains you
Cold is unforgiving
Why is it that i feel cold?
What is draining me
what is paining me?
what did i do that is so unforgivable?
The frost covers my skin
In a blanked of discomfort
nobody wants to hug you if your cold
nobody wants to kiss you if your cold
Nobody wants to be even near you if your cold
cold is not only a physical feeling but an emotional one too
you can say your cold
and it can mean 2 different things
But the fact remains
Nobody likes the cold, or to be cold
Except me
I embrace it
Become it
I love it... and hate it
I am cold
Maby that's why nobody loves me.

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No i dont really feel like this now... but sometimes i do. and so this is for the times when i do.

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  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    September 19
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    Wow very well expressed. Perhaps they are people who feel the same way. I can relate in a way.