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Jusqu'au Matin

Bonne nuit petit,
laisse les étoiles briller au-dessus,
elles sont tes lumières dans la nuit.

Bonne nuit cherie,
ecoute aux grillons at hibous,
ils sont ta berceuse.

Bonne nuit bébés,
faites les rêves puérils des enfants.
Ce sont ta échapée de la vie.
Alors, je vous garderai près de mon coeur
pendant la nuit,
jusqu'au matin.

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  • Aribeth
    November 20
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    A translation:

    The Perfect Woman
    The perfect woman
    Doesn’t fart
    Like a trumpet sounding
    But rather it is released
    Like she’s gently sighing

    The perfect woman
    Doesn’t swear
    Only shit and maybe bloody
    If they stub their toe
    Its sod it or even buggeration

    The perfect woman
    Doesn’t exist
    They fart and blame the cat
    They belch and blame the food
    They sweat and blame the change
    They swear and blame the man

    Quite amusing hun