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Where Are You?


Where are you?
I can't see you?
I want you!
But your not there...

Was it something i've done?
No...
Was it something I said?
No...

Where are you?
I want you.
I need you.

I can't have you...

Your gone.

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  • darkscorpia
    September 18, 2009

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    Very Good

    Very good, especially for your age. I really liked the part "I want you. I need you." and I also love how you give this sense of mystery and urgencey to the poem.