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Rebirth

Rebirth
Moving on is the process
Of shifting foot forward
Imbued with all the pain and guilt implied
In leaving the dearly loved behind
The phoenix must burn to return
The bough must bend lest it break
Forest floor must consume in flame
To allow the sapling a chance
Grief must slough off eventually
Or we are naught but surviving
And surviving is not worth it

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  • Scarlet x Stone
    September 19
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    Like this piece, esp, the last two lines, very powerful xxx