What once was love,
Has faded away,
Drifting ever so slowly
Into another heart.
Overflowing sorrow
Fills the cracks
Where my heart used to be.
As the wind blows,
I can almost feel you
As if your soul
Is taking over my body.
The melting snow
Shines with your reflection
As if it were made of glass.
I can feel you on my skin.
I can taste you on my tongue.
Your scent fills me.
But day by day,
Your memory fades
Into what will soon be
Nothing.
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Tim. Yet another drunk llama on acid situation.........
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Amazing! I loved it even though it was sad. <3 Great imagery.
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really powerfull poem! your use of language really creates beautiful imagery! great work
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Great stuff!!!
Impressive work...
Raw, smooth flowing narrative with great depth & imagery...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Very well written...Heartache is hard to deal with and get over...you are still young and will find the right person for you, one day, just don't try to rush into growing up, it comes fast enough...love ya'...
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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a lil repetitive but still good
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