dust began to fall from the heavens,
cold and gray with sharpie shades.
We were a living masterpiece...
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18 words only.
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A contest entry
- I want you to love me; [inviteonly] by ladybug..
900 points, ended October 26, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think of this?
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First off, the title catches my fancy, simply because sniffing sharpies is every teens hobby. xD
Anyways, the eighteen words...mean a lot. They can be taken in so many different ways, tailored to fit any certain person's situation, and I think that's really cool. It's great (: -
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in 18 words wow... this is inspired??
wish I was as inspired as that hahaha
great work xxx
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I love that last line, very strong
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Thanks, dear.
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i really like this one,
lucky.
i can never do word limits. i always have to write poetry as if purging the words (ewwy bad image)
what i meant was too many come out at once to be poetic naturally. this is a great image btw.
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really like it and the way it leaves the reader thinking
keep writing
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This is the style I like best from you. An endless amount of meanings, all mine to interpret as I wish
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Intresting take brother.You have such a talent for writting .With only 18 words you have made yourself another masterpiece.I do not know if I could have done that lol.I wish you all the luck in the world in the contest.
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coolio! Good luck!
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awesomeness
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