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Blame

Cheesy rhymes may pass your time
you criticise you point the blame
girl you should be ashamed past is
past it don't belong  in a persons
face you serve it up but can't stand
the taste girl i think it best  you
shut your face

Author notes

DONT PLACE BLAME YOU CANT TAKE YOUR SELF

just lonely and looking for someone to care

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