cunning of face
led to biased opinions
unhinging minds
to psychedelic
endearments...
festering,
twisting
leaving mouths
tasting like
shroom caps
until fogs lift
and sighs escape
smelling of
truth's serum
Author notes
The prompt is - Truth Revealed
The word limit is 28-31 Words
A contest entry
- PIF - Word Prompt by Kari.
1150 points, ended September 19, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the indepth thoughts that accompany your words here
revealing all
Well done on your HM hun and keep on penning your brilliant poems
Julie
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oooh nicely writ take on the prompt
awesome vocab and imagery used,
congrats on the HM
Tasha
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the truth can be addictive and at the same time elusive cant it... love the direction off the prompt... there certainly is magic in those shrooms thats for sure
congrats on your
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Truth will do that to you.. release you! I always love your writing so much, because your vocabularly is fabulous!!
Much love to you
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This was really deep. Thank you
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very nice take from the prompt, best of luck to you!
♥
whisper
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