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Sell it on Ebay

You have my heart so give it away,
because you don't want it
and because I don't need it

You have my heart give it away
don't know what to say
Maybe sell it on Ebay

It's not worth very much
It's broken and bruised
Over and over it's been used and abused

Just finish it off
put it in a blender
my life I'll gladly surrender

You had my heart
And then you ripped it in two
piece by piece shredded by you

No longer special is my name
because I no longer play your game
it was all just the same ol' same

Sell it on Ebay,
or just throw it away
its not worth much anyway

I don't really care
anytime or anywhere
Just throw it away
or sell it on Ebay

Author notes

I'm a heartless bastard, because I gave it away too many times. Too many times it's handed back in pieces. Well I don't want it back this time. Its easier being a heartless bastard than a broken hearted fool. I would rather be a heartless bastard than a broken hearted fool

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  • shattered.frisco
    September 28, 2009

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    Wow..intense and very relatable. I can relate, as the man I loved still has my heart, and I'm just plain heartless. Not a bastard tho This was really good. Nice and easy flow. Was there a reason you used no puncuation? It's somewhat ironic, I have no heart, and dont love anyone, but I am loved? Or so they say...so are they lying? Or they just love my personality? Good one.


  • oWl Quill
    September 18, 2009

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    Ok.... Tell you what i DIDN'T like??? That's difficult because I REALLY liked this poem. If I were you i would rephrase the line "over and over it's been used and abused" to something else. Maybe "It's barely alive, it's been so abused"? (If you keep the words the same you used the wrong 'it's'). Otherwise I love this poem. And as to your note. It's better to have a heart. Although having a heart is painful sometimes and it might be easier to cast it away, with no heart there is no love, and what is life without love?


    • Zannier Mysteres
      September 19, 2009
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      thanks for the awesome comment

      thank you again and yes i'll take it into consideration... And i will not live my life without love, for i am loved and i love still. just not right now the way i want to