she is not quite at attention
There's a space between her knees
And I love the look of tension
When My fingers close on these
It is only fair to mentionc
That I'm going to have a squeeze
There's a naked girl who's ready to obey
she looks nothing like a minger
Pure perfection in My eyes
As I scan her form they linger
On a spot between her thighs
When I follow with a finger
I'm rewarded with her sighs
she's My love and she is ready to obey
With her chains too light for clanking
Hands are held behind her back
I shall bend her down for spanking
And she'll welcome My attack
It's so sexy when she's thanking
Me for every loving smack
Every evening she is ready to obey
she will swallow till she's choking
With her hair held in My hand
While My other's gently stroking
Though for now relief is banned
Until I am deeply poking
And she's too far gone to stand
But I know however hard she will obey
Leave her standing while I'm drinking
Ever ready for some more
In her face I see her thinking
Of the perils left in store
And inside her she is sinking
It's a state she must adore
Since she tells Me she is ready to obey
Free her hands and leave her kneeling
Hear her tell Me I am kind
That is not the way I'm feeling
And it's not what on My mind
Heavy slaps that leave her reeling
Then my probing fingers find
That she's very wet and ready to obey
Now I'm thrusting deep inside her
Well rewarded by her screams
As I pull her hair and ride her
In the manner of My dreams
And the pleasure I've denied her
Drives her lusting to extremes
I say "COME" and she is ready to obey
After such a night of pleasure
We collapse upon the bed
We've enjoyed the fullest measure
Of the sex that's in the head
I could never leave My treasure
For another girl instead
She says stay and I am ready to obey
Author notes
A "minger" is a relatively recent British slang term for an unattractive female.
A contest entry
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OMG!
WOW! just wow! this is perfection. I'm gonna dream this tonight if there's a God. so very excellent! and bonus points for doing the caps correctly! can't say enough good things about it!
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I am very glad you enjoyed reading this, and if you dreamt it, please tell me all about it, I'm sure I can think of a reward if it's a good tale!
The D O M
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Be still my heart. What a wonderful journey. This is so sexy.
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I'm very pleased to meet a lady who likes this tale
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Very interesting.... it took my mind on a journey..
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Wonderful work here...
Got my heartbeat racing-
Not an easy thing to do.
Absolutely- Love it.
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Very vivid :-) Nice.
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Well done... now some honey and it'll be "just so". Seriously, I find no flaw with the story or pace... just 1 mis-spell. Stanza 4, should that be "choking" instead of "chocking"... tripped me up a bit there, but I love it!
Write on!
jIM
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very good
i like the use of minger
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This is great ... you would make any sub very happy and I hope she would do the same for you.
Although I am not into any of this, it was a pleasure to read and certainly upped my pulse.
Sue
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Wow, this is by far one of the greatest writes I have ever seen. You did an awesome job with this. Loved the rhyme scheme, it flowed nicely. Great job.
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Thank-you, I am always more than happy when a beautiful lady reads and appreciates my words
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