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Why didn't you tell me??

I thought that we were going to be together,
And I thought that our love will be forever,
Yesterday the sun shined through our heart,
But today the and flower are apart.

Where do I go for tomorrow life,
I feel like the man lost his wife,
You were like my angel that was so fine,
And you were my valentine.

But why didn't  you tell me,
The real story that suppose to be,
Why did you hid the truth,
That I'm not suppose to be with you?

Why didn't you tell me,
That he is the real key,
That got the way to your heart,
I won't cry if we apart.

Author notes

This poem was written for my story call the "Life of Yuki."
The main guy wrote a song for the girl that he love, that the girl hid from him that she already had a fiance.
but hope you like my poem! thank you!!

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