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Why is it when I say goodbye...

Why is it when I say goodbye...

I postpone the ineviteble tears
  with nervous laughter sung through reddened eyes

I tremble with fear of the vast unknown
  and shrink away from possibilities

I have stomachs full of pain and grumbling
  that ache at even the mention of love

I shrivel away from each new man's touch
  though we ache for fulfillment to be found

I grovel for a past I ran from
  and hide from the future in which I crave

Why is it when I say goodbye...

I have no where to turn in my running
 
        and noone to hold me in the crying

                and all I really want to do is turn
     
                          around fast,

                              running back

                                    to say

                                        hello

Author notes

i have never been good at goodbyes

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  • blessedbeyondbelief
    October 6, 2009

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    Why is it indeed??? Seems as though our lives are destined to be one where our paths only cross with those that doen't deserve us! How are you my long lost friend? I'll be back more often now... much as you, my life is never met with one that knows how to cherish the gift that was given to them.
    This is beautifully written...as always!


  • Majija
    September 22, 2009
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    Good poem. Well written. It's very dynamich and make you want to keep reading. Very touching. And goodbyes are hard.

  • SoulWhispher
    September 22, 2009

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    Your poetry is allways so full of emotions and touches the soul of the reader, may you find a smile in your life as you deserve it. Love John

    She stands alone in darkness
    Moonlight flowing within tears

    Feeling so lost and so alone
    Yet in shadows I stand near

    Like a ghostly shadow seen
    I hold her hand soft tight

    Standing in the shadows still
    There with the bright moonlight


  • PrincessOfFire
    September 20, 2009
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    shouldnt it be run back>running back at the end? We all seem to run from things at one time or another. Very well done. Rose