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Portrait of Myself

A portrait of myself
shows me for who I am,
the picture's always colorful
never will I be bland.

The stars shine overhead
like the sparkle in my eyes.
My days with never be cloudy
with ever so blue skies.

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I wrote that poem for an introduction for an essay. I couldnt think of a paragraph so I did that!

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  • humblpye gold member
    September 22
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    Well, it's a nice portrait yeah! always sunny and positive, pity we all can't think that way!
    Very well spoken!


  • SmartBrick
    September 20
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    Oh ya. That...


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    September 19
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    .Forgot the smileys!


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    September 19
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    Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • SmartBrick
    September 19
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    I like it! What essay are you taking about?

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