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Monolith

The world decays
Into the color of blood

As we watch the king and queen
Sit upon their thrones so high

We watch from below
On chairs of hopes and dreams

Yet the ones that are gone
Their lost dreams creaed the Monolith

And the king and queen simply watched us rot
As the Monolith grew with broken dreams

They did nothing but watched
As we tried to creat new dreams

But the dreams we made and watched break
Simply mad the Monolith grow even bigger

Now our world burns red
With the devils flames captering us

Within his grasps
The Monolith has reached the heavens

And we were now in hell
As a Monolith lightyears started to grow

Author notes

This, is what I believe is in store for us, in the future

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    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Nickey Mouse
    September 20
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    oh..wow

  • miamigirlno1 gold member
    September 18

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    interesting

    you need to edit this poem, there are many misspellings throughout the entire poem. Your imagination is very creative and your descriptions allowed the reader to visualize the content.