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Star of Jesus

A long time ago,
The world was neverknow,
I was just a little girl,
That wanted to be the star of the world,
But now I know and understand,
for me that God had a plan,
I will want to be a star,
But to Him that He will guide me far.

My heart was full of selfishness,
But God still love and forgiveness,
Once I fell to the ground,
He pull me back and heal my wound,
I was lost in my dream,
But He called me back to join the team,
Beacause His love is so deep and high,
He was always there when I cried.

You are like my mother and father,
That love me very much together,
With tears and broken heart you died on the cross,
You set good example for the world to see,
That your love is not just a wee,
In love you came to save  me.
When the sky turn to blue,
I know it's my turne to be with You.

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