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Black Lace


Tightens, loosens.
Then finally falls free.
Experiences we had and the things you shared with me.
Secrets exchanged our hearts on our sleeves.
But in the end you say it’s not u it’s me.
Breathless, restless
The search goes on.
Throughout this process I’m doing something wrong.
Never ending
Results are always the same.
Falling to fast only to end in pain.
My skin grows thick my heart grows strong.
To finally figure out what I’ve been doing wrong.
Taking advantage,  always needing your help
Not taking the time to think of someone other than myself.
Tears were shed hearts broken
You always told me to be more outspoken.
Shit happens  life goes on
Maybe one day I’ll admit to you myself that I was the one who was wrong.

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