Shattered like a precious stone
The shards glistening with dew
She held it too tight,
It cracked and mystic dust burst forth
Making a new exciting image
The crystals still wink at her
Reformed in incandescant glory
A contest entry
- Shards of Diamond by VoltaicHypnosis.
650 points, ended October 5, 9 entries
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Comments
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I quite like this poem, but your vocabulary could use a bit more strength. The imagery is not as powerful as it should be, although this is still a marvellous write...
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Mesmerising
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