i think on monday
she
l
o
s
t
herself
she was p.l.a.y.i.n.g in her bedroom
painting her face with s_m_i_l_e_s that
kept
running
away
from
her
...she was drawing pleasures on her bed
&& hiding them /in/ the sheets
because.she
was.too
young.to
know.what
to.do
with.them
life didn't w a i t for her
it ran by without (looking) back
Author notes
She Will Always be a Broken Girl
by She Wants Revenge
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ktbooFsuO4A
-Andi
A contest entry
- Dirty P/r/e/t/t/y... Dark or Gothic only................. by voodoo ink.
875 points, ended September 27, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
GOT comments??
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wow very creative write : ) i like the stanza with periods after every word, there was so much emphasis there when i read it. i listened to the prompt and i think you did wonders with it
great work and congrats on the bronze!
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Painting her face with smiles that kept running away from her...I love that line...This is a very well written dirty pretty poem! Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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Thank you!!
-Andi
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interesting. I see this is dirty pretty, it's kind of hard for me to read it... but I did anyways. lol. Very nice, keep up your great work. I wish you luck.
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Yeah, I've got a bunch of dirty pretties, some more extravagent that others but this was for a contest that required it....I'm glad you liked it!
-andi
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