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Being With You

The day we started we locked our eyes,
and I received a sweet surprise.
Crystal blue and full of life,
your love evaporated all my strife.

Always there with arms wide open,
I give you my heart as a token.
Kiss me soft and hold me tight,
you give off so much light.

I missed you when you weren't around,
and then my hands you finally found.
You led me from a darkened place,
from something that I could not face.

I'm glad to have you by my side,
and that I'll never worry you've lied.
You're the greatest thing in my life now,
and with what I had before I'll always know how.

A poem I wrote like two weeks ago...lmao. What do you think?

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