Fatigue finds faces, frequently found floundering for fiscal fulfillment
forever foregoing fanciful freedom from facts financial ... ...
© 2009 Joy A. Burki-Watson
Author notes
Rules required - realliteration!
A contest entry
- alliteration #1 by Salty Hibiscus.
600 points, ended September 23, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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clever and true. Nice write.
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another short poem. ugh i know what it is like! money controls our lives. wonderful use of words start with F. well done and thanks for sharing.
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furtive feelings fly farther, fiscal fantasy finds failure...fond forbearance...fine form...PK
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Very succint! and a very well done piece of alliteration...I like the 'craggy wall' BG you used here...facial facts oh yeah!
Nice one Joy!
J
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More than one of my fiscal follies have caused me to frown. Again and again I marvel at your command of the English language. Best of luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Thank you for dropping by the homepage the other day, sorry I missed you. My Lulu experience didn't go well, so I've just posted a link to the inner book (no cover as of yet) which is offered pro bono if you get my drift! Friends ride for free!
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Math makes you moody!
May magical music motivate your muse--
merrily!
Oh, so clever, joy!!!
M-C
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Huh? Say that again, but this time faster.
I get tired just figuring out my monthly Moxie bill...true it's as much as the gross national product of several small nations...
I can think of at least one other "F" word I often use when doing my budget.
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Indeed, facing financial facts frequently foments facial fatigue!
Tongue in cheek (or teeth over bottom lip) write! Twice as good because it has competent content
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