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Whirl of life

Life
A whirl
Of happiness
And sorrow
It has twists and turns
Ups and downs
And you have to figure it out

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Maybe I'm going too much on the hwole lfie thing; I mean I wrote a poem that had 74 lines!! Even I got tired writing it. But I'm just trying to express my feelings, however bad I may be at it

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  • pop123
    September 18
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    I didnt notice it was a pyramid!