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Partially Addicted

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I'm addicted to the streets,
I'm addicted to the rain.
I'm addicted to its poison,

I'm addicted to the pain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • i like this. it's simple and short and has so much meaning.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 5

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    I am addicted to hun from one end to the other life screams Hugs awesome mind deep thoughs always Angel♥


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 4
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    Agrees with the comment below me. Alot.


  • yellowsub
    September 30
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    I like this. A lot.


  • Dearly Beloved...
    September 19
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    it was short aburpt but sincere,
    Very real still great

  • hend shaheen
    September 18
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    so real....short..simple but explains many things!!!!nice work!!!


  • Minstrel-Morose
    September 18

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    This is a very blunt, very real poem. It's kinda like a slap to the face. Wake up people! Are you listening?


  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 18

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    So much said in so few words. I read this one twice and got more out of it than the first time. The meter and rhyme lend itself to the straightforward, but personal, tone of the poem. They're also perfect and unforced. Well said.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 18

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    Sometimes we are addicted to the good as well as the bad, despite our not wanting to be! I was addicted to the pain for years.


    • redbarchettadrive gold member
      September 18

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      It has a way of opening ones eyes after the swelling subsides.
      Sorry you had pain though! Nobody deserves that.

      • kiwigirljacks gold member
        September 18
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        Thanks We've all been through pain in our lives that's for sure. Now, I'm not sure which I'd rather have... I have a physical chronic incurable pain disorder.. I suppose that is better than emotional pain right? lol

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