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Broken Yet Free

I was young and desperate,
Wanting a love so strong.
You were mature and greedy,
Defiling my body with your touch.

It shouldn't have been allowed,
Those acts you performed.
You loved making me scream,
Making my blood flow freely.

All the whips and toys,
The sodomy you performed.
All of it broke my walls,
It tore apart my body and soul.

Here I am, in your bath.
I've carved my skin myself.
This time the bleeding will be permanent;
I am finally escaping your games.

I hope you realize now,
That the torture you provided me,
Was the final slice of this blade;
The final cry for help from my lips.

I watch the water turn black,
The last view of my fading vision;
The final piece being dropped in place.
My freedom has come at last!

AN: http://fenrizulf.deviantart.com/art/I-m-Sorry-18855465 (This was the picture I used in order to write this piece. I do not own the picture, but I did write this)

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