Bright red lanterns sway,
in the streets of Pontocho.
Incense in the air.
In a list
A contest entry
- Mid-Autumn Haiku by crivanea.
400 points, ended September 19, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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can you see my grin?
very nice....i love the last line..and you gave a location as well..adore the title..and so far ..first one i read that mentions incense..nicely done poet..great visual
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nice haiku...a very pleasant pic
best of luck in the contest... i dont see u much around!!
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A pleasant and very sensual haiku.
Well done
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