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[ Realizing my life isn't going as planned ]

Realizing my life isn't going as planned
I must admit that I find myself dammed
To dreams made of sugar, and cardboard, and fluff
The things that aren't real just aren't enough

Now I know exactly what I want to be
A loved perfect girl who lives by the sea
But the sea is too far, perfection untrue,
And finding love is  too hard to do

I smile and laugh, but I'll never confide
The feelings that I have locked deeply inside
Of flaws in my mind, loneliness in my heart,
And the yearning for ocean now that we are apart

So I'll sit here in silence, living a lie
My soul burdened with sadness as I try to deny
The aching and yearning I find in my heart
For a life deemed too absurd from the start

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  • Goldpiranhafinch
    September 24
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    I like you. Is that good?
    That's so sad. It's really good, and the meter is perfect, but it's so sad. I love it.