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Haiku 6

Time forever etched
in chrystalized memory.
Ornament of mind.

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    October 5
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    Yes - lovely and simple


    • SoulJourney
      October 8
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much for the gold ObscureInsanity, this was a wonderful contest. I appreciate your comments.

  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    September 21
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    Simple. Beautiful.


  • abuyi
    September 20
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    this is a beautiful haiku on the prompt... i tried writing haiku and still trying i just cant get it
    neways this is a wonderful write and bets of luck