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~A Hard Rain on Sunday

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The cumulus gather like life's
final friends at a funeral.

Shuffling.

Their pulsating

monochromatic prettiness
stares squarely into
what would soon enough be
their own deep bone storage unit.

Their cheap glitter jewelery
swings and chatters in the

velvet wind as
their vicious mumblings
make a 360
° revolution.

 

I felt like laughing from the next hole over

as the dirt from the first shovel's face
fell like a hard rain on Sunday.



"Knock, knock, knock...

Is there anybody in there?"

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 4
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    !!! XD


  • Denerica silver member
    September 18
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    Wow...really deep...feeling the emotion and possible slight anguish. Well done. Blessings.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 18

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    You've done a fab job here of weaving a wordbank into something flowing with great imagery! I suck at wordbanks lol... I really enjoyed this, and agree the background is great too


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 17
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    Oh yeah. AWESOME background!


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 17

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    Awesome poem, hon. You missed monochromatic and velvet...though.

    Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

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