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As the waves wash away
my heart
I feel set apart
from what has held me so long
a certain power
seemed to be too strong
I tried running at first
and didnt suceed
I cried but wasnt relieved
became silent and wished I hadnt believed
Myself
because now Im more afraid of whats real
and its so hard for me to heal
So I finally let go
of this sensitive sorrow
that has held me so long
I let the waves absorb my weakness
and carry it away
someday I will forget
what I have done wrong

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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 3

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    SUCH DEEP THOUGHT!!!!

    There will be times when ones heart feels it can take no more sorrow, no more pain. I find most today are afraid to care, afraid to open their hearts. I fear by taking this way out leaves one so very empty and sad.