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Carry On (a song)

I got home after school one day,
I got bored I had nothing to do.
I was thinking and wondering away,
As always I was thinking of you.

I don’t know how much you realise,
The amount of love I have for you.
It’s so hard to explain sometimes,
But I figured this song is one way to.

      I never want to be alone,
      For without you my world is gone.
      I keep my heart from turning to stone,
      Without you I couldn’t carry on.
      Carry on, carry on.

So, here goes, I’ll share my heart,
I’ll tell you everything I feel.
Love is an understatement to my love,
And I know for sure it’s real.

[BRIDGE]
Whenever I see you I feel in my heart,
A beat or two skip by.
The way you talk is such a fine art,
And when I hear it I swear I can fly

      I never want to be alone,
      For without you my world is gone.
      I keep my heart from turning to stone,
      Without you I couldn’t carry on.
      Carry on, carry on.

I hope this song has explained,
Or given the slightest justice.
I love you more than anything Craig,
And you, my love are my purpose.

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Derived from my poem: Craig

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  • LifeEndsNow
    November 21
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    Hey this is pretty cool, I see some talent in your song writing, great job!! love is amazing most of the time, i'm glad you have it, it makes for some hit songs on the radio.

    Come now
    See the beauty
    Start the count down, count down
    To the sun, as it begins to rise
    And just wait, just wait
    You'll see that someday
    You'll never have to be afraid
    Of what you believe
    Of the life that you lead

    great job!!