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Ribbon

Straitlaced hugs
Silky strands
Woven tenderly

Soft as a new born child
Strong as lead
Holding you together with simple ties

A higher high than any drugs
She's glad to fill the demands
Don't let go early

Every night personality,restyled
Carefully fed
Must never arise

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