Such a questionable place,
with not much around.
Some would say dull, plain and no fun,
but oh no, not me.
I'd say relaxing, peaceful and quite unique.
Never was there a place as this.
The water trickles in the creek,
and into a larger river more down south.
Slow soothing waves, tiny but there,
give a relaxing tone to any viewer.
The fish swim up the stream fighting the current.
Such clear water in the littlest stream.
The trees sway in the breeze, rustling,
and knocking old leafs away.
With a breeze, of the pine trees,
nothing seems more peaceful around.
The birds glide with a soft coming breeze.
A beautiful sun shining through the braches above.
The noises around, made by many animals,
makes one think of all that is around.
Birds chirping, crickets singing, animals rustling,
making the surroundings unique, unlike any other.
Animals come and animals go, not taking notice of the girl.
No harm to them no reason for harm, to her.
Not likely for many to be
at a place such as this.
Many would rather stay away,
but oh no, not me.
I love it here, such a different world.
Here I am, in my, Summer Sanctuary.
Does something tug at you?
Comments
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pretty good.
Well...I would you to see you write in in rhyme but it's good as it is. I like free verse and it does have some very good imagery...so I like that. Everyone needs a place to go to get away from everyone and everything and just to let go and relax.

