'Member back in the day when we lived in that trailer,
And when the wind blew the roof would rattle and shake?
'Member when the only sound that would put me to sleep,
Was the soft pitter patter of rain drops?
'Member when I was tiny and the idea of anything taller then you,
Would make my eyes water and my bottom lip poke out?
'Member?
You told me that if it stuck out any further,
Then you would land an air plane on it?
'Member?
And then you went whoosh and put your finger on my lip?
'Member when I would wrap my tiny little hand around your giant finger?
And you'd look at me and smile?
And then you'd place soft butterfly kisses on my forehead.
'Member when the rain would start to fall from the sky,
And I'd stick my tongue out to taste gods elixir?
And the rest would fall like ballerinas at my feet,
Splattering your legs, and all of me.
'Member?
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'Member?
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Please tell me you 'member?
'Member when I'd try to make rain angels,
And you'd laugh at me?
'Member when I'd come home soaked from the rain,
And mommy would be mad?
'Member?
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Daddy 'member?
I 'member.
You 'member?
I know you 'member.
I 'member like it was yesturday.
I was smilin and laughin and dancin on my tippidy toes.
'Member daddy 'member?
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It's ok if you don't 'member,
I 'member!
Author notes
This poem is tellin you about all the things I liked to do as a kid with my daddy
its not really one memory its a group of memories about my favorite thing as a kid. i hope you like it
h a l f p a s t 4 e v e r
A contest entry
- I want a AP family too!!!!!! by lolagirl.
400 points, ended September 28, 13 entries
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Oh this poem is precious. It tells me so much what type of person you are. It is cleverly written aswell as creatively written. I enjoyed reasing it very much!!!! Though I would reaallly like if you could tell me which member you would like to be as I dont know how old you are or even your gender, lol which i may need to know to give u a appropriate title. heehee
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thanks and i would love you to be my daughter, just that I don't think its possible for a 6 year old to give birth, which is how old i would have to have been. heeeheee
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lol wow. theres always adoption lol jk jk anything really is fine with me. i just love the idea of an ap family and easy way to make some great friends.
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that is true heehee I love that you have pink and black hair I think that is such a pretty colour combination. I have black hair and was going to get pink streaks but apparently you have to bleach the parts first then die them ppink, and at the hairdressers i went to it was gonna be so expensive so i didn't
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lol i get my friends mom to do it for me its about 30 bucks altogether so its extremely cheap
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The rain can be very inspiring for poetry muse...my favorite lines from this were: 'Member when the rain would start to fall from the sky,
And I'd stick my tongue out to taste gods elixir?
And the rest would fall like ballerinas at my feet,
I 'member alot of fond memories from my childhood, too...
YOur AP daddy likes this one!!!*Hug*
Blessed Be,
JEremy
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well thanky AP daddy you made me smile
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omg this so reminds me of my dad
my dad suffers from like memery lose so wen ever i talk to him i him to tell him about everything that has happen in the past
i no longer talk to my dad b.c i cant but this brings tears to my eyes
i hope u win this a great poem
keep writing
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im sorry my reply is so late, i cant reply on mobile. thankyou and im glad you liked my poem. im so sorry about your daddy, the idea of that brings a tear to my eye as well.
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this is really good. but also kinda sad. u did a good job. great write kari.
~destiny
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thanky destiny. and you are pretty btw i love and miss you so much:"(
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im not pretty
i miss u too T_T
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