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Diana of the Dunes

Memories fade
like grains of sand
slipping through our fingers
onto the endless dunes of time

one grain holds my vision
of that woman by the sea
the goddess of my heart
a shrine of beauty

she alone preserves my existence.

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    October 7

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    This was nicely done. It was short and straight too the point. I found this amazing. It was very well written. I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work!


  • xxDemonicxx
    September 27
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    Amazing
    i really loved it
    very meaningful