I have walked dark roads;
I want you to shove me into the corners
on eternity's back alley
and see where it takes me
this time.
The labyrinth of time beckons,
but never promises to lead me home.
I have followed her whispers before;
now I find myself dancing
on the edge of eternity,
with no doubt that I might give in.
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Came to me...in a Facebook status. Yes, admittedly, I was drunk.
But I like it.
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I like it too.... responding
I will pull you into my darkness
draining your resolve to fight me
pressing you against my hard soul
twisting your heart at my command.
Time convolutes your desire for home
whispering into your will, abandon
your hope, you are destined to twist
above the void of forever
by the strings of my dark desire
which you cannot deny.
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I like it. I think we have a proper collaboration going...
I could well write a response to this. -
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Works for me
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MAny things come to mind to reply with, may just have to respond in a dark one back to ya. Hmmmm.... maybe
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