She kissed me
forcefully,
then as she retreated,
tenderly bit my lower lip.
I tasted the lime
and drew in the burn
of the cheap Tequila
from her breath.
She kissed me deeply again
intoxicating me further.
“Happy Birthday to me.”
She said.
I ordered two more shots.
A contest entry
- but not just any kiss... by JinSays.
1532 points, ended September 21, 39 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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what a cute and compelling poem. sensuous and real!
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Uh huh, I've experienced a few of these.
Nice write and congrats.
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oh, that's just perfect.
perfect.
yay for tequila...sigh..
yep.
thank you
love,
jin -
Awesome
Vivd wordplay... Sounds like my favorite bar. lol Good write.
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just keep her away from the birthday candles
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i found this to be amusing only because I've watched this happen on many occasions ... the effects of alcohol are always entertaing well done and good luck in the contest
~Betrayals
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I've seen it too, though it has never happened to me, when I saw the contest this scene jumped into my mind. Thanks for stopping by to read.
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love this.... it is so sexy as she pulls away and bites your bottom lip... soooo easily pictured this one. yummy!
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