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Strangers in the Rain.

It was a beautiful day. Rain falling from a sunny sky.
The drops of liquid light hitting my gloomy up turned face.

It quickly washed away my lonliness.
giving me a thousand dancing falling friends.
Each one reminding me in the rain we are all nurished.

soon I smiled and my bare feet moved.
Toes splashing delightedly in a million tiny lakes newly born.
Droplets, like hitchhikers, clinging to my leg hairs.

I travel swift in the renewing downpour.
The waters filling the many empty voids in my being.

In the distance I see a dark shape in the falling crystals.
It quickly formed close with arms and legs and smiling face.
Like a princess of a water world with thin dress soaked and clingy.

The waters from the heavens caressing her face.
Their sparkle out done by that of her eyes.
We drew close in the depths of a puddle and stopped.

Our hands came together with tiny drops running down fingers.
We walked now together needing not names.
The rain being all we needed to know.

This is the beauty of the world, the rain.
In it we know ourselves and are comforted.
Here love is found in perfection between two strangers.

Strangers in the rain.

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This was inspired by some one special to me.I found out last night We both love the rain, when we are in it.

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  • Beverlynohime
    September 22

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    We also Fell

    The rain knew us in an instant
    and we also knew each other
    Together in the liquid crystals
    we kissed a kiss to last forever

    Like diamonds pouring down
    down our skin, shining in our
    essence and in our eyes;
    Wet flower smell all around us

    The air mildly chilly, yet humid
    In your eyes those little dancing
    drops of dew looked like tiny stars
    filling up the space to your heart

    Breathe heavy, arms surrounding
    Our hearts pounding together,
    In the beauty of this world we love
    As the raindrops fell we also fell...


    You Inspired me.

  • Beverlynohime
    September 22
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    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE THE RAIN!


  • Lightning Struck
    September 21

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    Awe, that is so sweet...i could visualize the whole scenario the entire way through...great write!! i really enjoyed reading it!!

    Lightning <3