I’m a fashion ***top model*** and you’re a Rock .. super star .. ,
• Together in lo♥ve and fame we will go far •
Your Armani mania =) perfume =) MiXeD with my Roberto Cavalli
I sway in our..smoky.*:. room to …classical… music♪♪ like Vivaldi
\\\Flash\\\ our ///tattoos/// yours ^~edgy ^~ mine ***elegant***
[B][r][e][a][k][i][n][g] open our $ kMoet Champaign $ bottle
And o0o00oo~ drinkingo)oo00oo to be irrelevant
My ~ porcelain ~ # complexion # against your |||light||| %golden% @tanned skin@
And we will blend and texture like a golden sunrise on sheets slightly thin
i am elegance without frills. i am poetry without formatting. i am life without strings."
I picked Clarins and clinique makeup over cheaper Rimmel
*•.¸(*•.¸♥¸.•*)¸.•*.. k
I love your army haircut and your shiny gel
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(¸.•´ (¸.• we shine brilliantly together like glitter
I have a crack wore style without the Kate moss litter
im a p.r.e.t.t.y whore with smokey eyes
your like my body guard in discise
I’ll vomit out rainbows from my skittles lolly binge
Inject glitter into my veins through a diamond syringe
Hide cocaine in my sugar bowl of bohemia crystal
I’ll stash our money inside my pink colored pistol
I kiss your cigarette flavored mouth with my fuchsia painted lips
And assure you W
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No one will suspect a thing
baby we can go far
They will only see love and color to which in this world we bring .♥ k
Author notes
Baby we can go far . k
A contest entry
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aww people can be harsh ... i actually liked this poem i think you keep your style and keep it close this was really fun thanks for entering in my contest and i wish you the bestest of luck in it too ! ~jasmine~
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thanks for entering...but i agree its cliche.
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It'd be a good idea to do a spell and grammar check.
This is everything that is wrong with dirtypretty. This is the whole master versus follower problem that plagues all forms of standard religion and philosophy: someone gets a good idea and then people come along, don't get it, and make a mess of it. I'm sorry, I've heard all of this before, and more poetically.
Why don't you try writing a poem and put all the glitzy formatting away in a box? The poem, what it is, is lost in all the formatting.
Try writing something you really mean.
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