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Seven Ages of Contemporary Man and Seven Stages of Singularity Man after W S

Seven Ages of Contemporary Man 

 

Each word's world spells cage,
with all its peoples temporary strayers:
their exits sure, with slight trust in re-entrances, 
each pouts, reels out doubt life by fits and starts : 
trace acts embracing seven stages.  

First the infant,
environment uncertain still, although
his genes be tested. Then the anxious schoolboy,
I.Q. tested, repeating like parrot
unwillingly at school. Then the graduate
sighing in earnest, with a hopeful eyebrow
bent to employer’s ballad. Then the careerist,
full of strange ideas and innovative strategies,
jealous of advancement, avoiding open quarrel,
seeking swift promotions,
out-thinking colleagues’ schemes. Then the Director,
in fair round belly with best scotch salmon lined,
full of turncoat schemes, intrigues and net investments, -
and so he plays his part. The sixth age shifts
into the lean and slippered pensioner,
with spectacles on nose, few pounds beside.
his will, once strong, tottering towards the inertia
of oblivion, and his once manly voice
turning again towards childish trebles, pipes
and whistles in his sound. Last scene of all,
that ends this strange eventful history,
is second childishness, then Earth’s amnesia, -
false teeth, frayed hair, alone, sans everything.

 

Seven Stages of Singularity Man

 


All our worlds wars wage,
rewarding winners, sinners are rejected
as flotsam under notice, straws neglected
lost in a hurly-burly turbulence – at sea
where few may float to coat card destiny
I.D. with Saville Row – where herring bone none flee.
All wordlywise to yoke are paid or payers:
folks’ taxes sure, with little trust in pensions
thus each man lives by stars or concrete facts,
his acts spanning seven stages. 

First the infant, genome boosted,  hormone instilled,
his sex well willed from cryo chilled to artificial womb,
no tomb need know, as all impressions shall fall in escrow,
held against accident and the passing years.
The sighs, the why’s the very tears embedded
in external disk hard against the day
when use thereof is made by maid or may
be transferred or transcripted for re-use
by hook, by crook, by chip which steers the future’s flow. 

Though planned career, here scholar’s way is seen
I.Q. high, by rote no time to waste
unwillingly at school, when distance learning,
ubiquity and spelling correctors, counter haste
to set the scene for greater meaning held
by generations passed so fast, trod down
in all senses of the term, their term soon past.
Here screening, streaming finds at last its place
to weed from need and greed each shining face
as progress turns to better bland replace
with plastic minds and spirits wi-max linking
and chips sub-cutaneous to help with thinking
while inklings bi-directional may bait
the watchers’ curiosity, translate
into advancement through the stream of thought
whose gist no longer may for gold be bought,
irrespective of parental yearning.


Then freshman turns towards the graduate, -
“knowledge enormous makes a God” of each,
as who is taught, and who advanced to teach,
on what wire taut some walk, while others reach
a plateau which no chateau guarantees.
Some play the teasers, others stay the tease,
sighing in earnest, with a hopeful ear
bent to employer’s ballad, which one year
will offer - contract limited to goal win/win,
as margin thin for error is advanced.
Strategic choices, chance,
here strive both to unite and to prepare
further growth.  Uniqueness everywhere –
though some be more unique than others
thanks to foresight, fathers, mothers, -
may compensate for past delay
investing time where counterparts at play
fail to distinguish their priorities.
Hard lessons learned here.
Tearful pleas attend the second rate on bended knees
who seek to leapfrog into jobs which may
provide security and ample pay
to compensate long term uncertainties.


Here starts cognizance of the challenges
a century before were unimagined,  even by
free-thinkers – though their thoughts reached bye and bye
to sky, to space, to stars and still beyond.
Here starts the game of singularity
where online multitask may supercede
the student, or the businessman whose greed
fails to factor possibilities
outside his ken when inputs such as these
are absent from the past’s pen and when need
is noticed not, or but perceived
through a glass darkly as each fate is weaved
through contradictions to a semblant light -
refracted, and distracted megabyte
of information processed.

 


From freshman through the system will proceed
each cyphered soul whose whole and sum are called
towards the common weal – or else blackballed
be those who chose to stand and wait, sans speed.

Then the careerist, full of strange ideas and innovative strategies,
jealous of advancement, avoiding open quarrel, seeking swift promotions,
out-thinking colleagues’ schemes. 
By Nature well or whether poor endowed
bellwether reputations well sustained
must keep their end up, rumour’s buzz maintained
by Cialis, Viagra – compensation which from Vagina dildo dispensation
anticipates complaint as faint heart’s compensation..
Careers upon the home front lean for force
to counter opposition in due course
from bootblack’s Waterloo, Penn Central station,
to recognition from a grateful nation.

Careers aren’t what they were with Pension Schemes
more schemes than pensions, - meat for mirage dreams –
for who meets mete rewards well merited
when corporation hopping drives ahead
the game of fame pr fortune well intended –
with one mistake THE one which can’t be mended!
So rules are bent none else see their bended,
with savvy sense and luck fortuitous blended.
Careers aren’t what they were with competition
from “yellow peril” compromising mission,
when global village information flows
short circuit secrets  - half-lives decompose
at rate no Fate before could presuppose.
When “Ball no Question makes of Ayes and Noes,
But Right or Left, as strikes the Player goes.”
Yet “He that toss'd Man down into the Field,
He knows about it all - HE knows - HE knows! ” –
But “Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
Moves on: nor all careerist’s wisdom, Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all his Tears wash out a Word of it.

Then the Director, in fair round belly best scotch salmon lined,
full of turncoat schemes, intrigues and net investments, -
and so he plays his part.  – A part responsibility
would have no part of if its choice were free –
but ‘Times they are a-changing” and the tune
squares, spares shareholders susceptibility

reporting rising profits quaterly.
Stock options open source manipulation
to closed shop club with rubber stamp equation.

The sixth age shifts into the lean and slippered pensioner,
with spectacles on nose, few pounds beside.
his will, once strong, tottering towards the inertia
of oblivion, and his once manly voice
turning again towards childish trebles,

pipes and whistles in his sound. 
Illness and loneliness take toll
till toll takes what is left, while jokes once droll
pinpoint isolation from the whole in corporate,

which loses sight of goal.

 

Last scene of all, that ends this strange eventful history,
is second cycling, no amnesia, - no Alzheimer to fear,

no loss of trace,
no care, no wear, no old age and no seizure.
Emotions stored or slotted into place
within the space of nanny nano interface perpetuates the human race
for access on demand, or re-emergence –
depending on technology’s convergence
and aptitudes stochastic which may be
exploited by society as input options offered for the game
warm life may play with life inanimate –
the same these both may seem entwined,

as fate prepares recycled change appropriate –

shifts paradigm too few appreciate.
Yet fate is blind behind the Janus jaw,

and singularity demands much more
than just blind chance unjust, uncharted trip
whereon although some sinners meditate none can with truth predestinate
rhyme Time with Time which time itself needs track
back to black drawing board with cards unstacked.

Thus singularity, by most so prized,

sees efforts all too often compromised
by time and tide are quickly circumsized

as risk/reward equation is denied
solution’s resolution. Humbled pride

remains our lot, forgotten is our ride. 

Author notes

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Candle http://www.flickr.com/photos/richjohnsonphoto/342757945/

 

Hourglass http://www.flickr.com/photos/bogenfreund/556656621/


William Shakespeare - As You Like It Act II Scene vii

 

All the world's a stage,
And all the men and women merely players:
They have their exits and their entrances;
And one man in his time plays many parts,
His acts being seven ages. At first the infant,
Mewling and puking in the nurse's arms.
And then the whining school-boy, with his satchel
And shining morning face, creeping like snail
Unwillingly to school. And then the lover,
Sighing like furnace, with a woeful ballad
Made to his mistress' eyebrow. Then a soldier,
Full of strange oaths and bearded like the pard,
Jealous in honour, sudden and quick in quarrel,
Seeking the bubble reputation
Even in the cannon's mouth. And then the justice,
In fair round belly with good capon lined,
With eyes severe and beard of formal cut,
Full of wise saws and modern instances;
And so he plays his part. The sixth age shifts
Into the lean and slipper'd pantaloon,
With spectacles on nose and pouch on side,
His youthful hose, well saved, a world too wide
For his shrunk shank; and his big manly voice,
Turning again toward childish treble, pipes
And whistles in his sound. Last scene of all,
That ends this strange eventful history,
Is second childishness and mere oblivion,
Sans teeth, sans eyes, sans taste, sans everything.

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  • black-phenoqu
    November 4

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    i refuse to read all this.

    i know i didn't post a line limit, but this is insane! this is probably longer than The Raven and at least that was entertaining! this is just confusing and long and boring.


  • Desire gold member
    September 24

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: Seven Ages of Contemporary Man and Seven Stages of Singularity Man after W S
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
    I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for Heavenly Angel's contest
    You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
    Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
    Woven Strengths: While reading Your words I kept being shown a flag waving
    in the breeze and at first it was a single flag but then shown reference to the United Nations and many flags to follow~ felt as if symbolism...whether Metaphor or literal I was pulled to these lines:
    squares, spares shareholders susceptibility
    reporting rising profits quaterly.
    Now word: quaterly...I thought You may have meant quarterly
    Also- these lines:
    with spectacles on nose, few pounds beside.
    his will, once strong, tottering towards the inertia
    I noticed the *his* ...h is not Capitalized where other areas after
    a period You Capitalize...this one grabbed me because it stood out
    Thought it may have been an oversight~
    Wanted to run that by You for review as well
    Strange as it may sound while reading I kept being shown Wall Street and Main Street...but also the Greed and for Profit also Not for Profit- however from the beginning- I am shown the Fledgling broker...working way up...tie tight- suits ironed but the lust for fame and fortune not tasted yet~
    But when the blood trickles and tongue laps~ then the lamb gets eaten by the lion as I am being shown Adore the alliteration and internal also
    external rhyme~ Also I kept being shown reference to *environment*
    whether in the womb or outside...how the factors within this *environment*
    plays a part re: disposition for example and tolerance~ was shown that
    while reading Your words
    However that is to be Interpreted
    Love the direction You took with this prompt
    Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
    Powerful verse and message You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Then the Director,
    in fair round belly with best scotch salmon lined,
    full of turncoat schemes, intrigues and net investments, -
    Vivid Imagery poured in these lines...

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~



  • sinfull
    September 19

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    " - half-lives decompose
    at rate no Fate before could presuppose." Hallmark you. Deep insightful, introspectuve and considering the human condition. I echo Waydownuponjoy's comment..you are W.S. in a time machine.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    September 18

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    A very indepth piece this is! Wow!
    You took the prompt and ran with it
    I had to come back a 2nd time so I could fully contain your words
    Well done!!


  • waydownuponjoy
    September 18

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    Me thinks thou doest ...

    not jest too much and that your insightful pondering and grand use of language skills are an asset to the liability of learning for others. You certainly have entertained me with your skillful adaptation of thought to the seven stages of man and with minor rages here and there have managed to encompass, in your poem, more than anyone begins to think of in their lifetime. As always I feel that your timing, for being born, was late or perhaps you are 'he' (WS) who has come around again to apprise the wise or disguise the prize for talent not often given.
    Congratulations for all your endeavors to educate us all in the fine art of poetry.

    joy


  • French Tries
    September 18

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    Both a very clear-sighted and bitter-tasting poem, which enlights the depth of your thoughts and sensibility. I'm not afraid to say that your penning is, AS USUAL, mastered and beautiful, for I think such a talent can't be trivialized by the repetition of its wonderful singularity.

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