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The Rope

I am jumping over the rope
with two other girls on both ends
turning the rope over my head
I must see the rope
so my feet do not touch it.
when they turn it fast
I watch the other girls do it right
and I am on the line , I will go last.

Now the girl do not turn the rope
but they rise it up not to high
I need to get under it, I  hope
I ask myself, How can I
as I watch other girls try the game.
they do it right
I ask myself if I can do the same.
The bell rings to go inside
Recess is over , I have no reason to hide.



Author notes

I went to catholic school, no playground
I have more games we played at lunchtime
I will share them later.
great contest, you got my memories in full swing.

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  • darkscorpia
    September 21
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    Its just such a nice poem.


  • poisonivystar4
    September 20
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    You have more rythm than I ever did!


  • Stardust Memories
    September 17

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    Sweet, I liked this. I bulit up afew pictures in my mind after reading it. Good take on the prompt I thought! Good luck and thankyou very much for entering!


  • Shantti silver member
    September 17

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    This is sweet. I love the way it brings back memories of school. I had the hardest time learning double dutch lol Great expressions here.
    Good luck in your contest