The season of spring has a special charm
For it carries the mystical fragrance of
Celestial cherubs
On its wings~
On its petals
That flap open like flower angels
As if blessings blossoming in the breeze
Stretching from the heartbud of
A vernal bloom~
The blush of a seasonal dawn.
(And need I say that a dawn is meant
To be welcomed again
And again?
You can very well go
Ask the chirping birds!)
Author notes
Option Three
A contest entry
- Option-contest With Happy Content by Vernal Bloom.
625 points, ended September 23, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ah my dear khahar joon! I love all the sweet kind words you brought through your poem. I love nature and spring has a special meaning for me and I smell here the fragrance of spring. A sweet write as it was expected from you!
I thank you kindly for sharing this with us and good luck to you in the contest
~Massy~
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Thank you, dear sister I am glad you liked the piece.
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I have birds by the droves eating from my feeder on my little patio. I also have a squirrel and doves as well as a lizard who visit everyday.
I did ask the birds and they said you are right and they love the poem as much as I do
Beautiful Sis
Lynda
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Thank you, dear sissy
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How cheerful is this? This is a beautiful write! So happy! I hope you do well in the contest you have entered. Hmm, "the mystical fragrance of
Celestial cherubs" - how unique! I now have the urge to buy their cologne.
Nicely done, with good use of poetic devices.
David.
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Thank you
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
It is so special to be among the birds first thing in the morning as the sun rises! It is always so serene and relaxing!
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Thank you
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