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Etchings of Time

Sun scorched path
of labored days

Long of life,
patterned in ways

Settled in spirit,
completed the climb


Face now reflects--

Etchings of time

Author notes

http://photographsforthesoul.blogspot.com/2009/04/photographs-of-people-wrinkled-beauty.html

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  • Macsword
    September 30

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    I think...

    you did well for your prompt poet. Good words here.


  • Pheonix
    September 27

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    i ike this piece. is amazing how in so few lines you created beauty. thank you for entering the contest1


  • marandah gold member
    September 18
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    I like this very much. Thank you :-)