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Don't Turn Away

We've come to this dark place before
stood this path a million times
the hurtful memories hateful words
they scar are hearts and minds

A partnership is all we want
but we scream it out in vain
telling each other we don't care
but we are so much the same

To be told that we aren't enough
Is what we feel inside,
so we prove it to ourselves
again our wills collide.

I'll make him prove he loves me
So I'll test the lines he draws
I'll make her prove she loves me
By withdrawing from it all

We should be on the same side
fighting towards the same sweet goal
Not pushing each others limits
Demanding to have control

What happened to the eyes of love
That deeply looked in mine
The feeling that together we could
beat the storms of time

I'm tired of those lines we've drawn
between us in the sand
I'll cross over if you promise
Just to hold my hand

Through the fire and the rain
the laughter and the tears
I promise we are both enough
and I'll prove it thru our years

And so my final plea is just
we give ourselves the chance
to grab the brass ring...hold on tight
Find one more time ... romance.

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  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 18

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    what an awesome write.... i love it.... great way to express ur heart... love is a wonderful yet hard thing.... sometimes you just want to give up but you dont cause most of the time it can be a beautiful thing also.... stay strong and thanks for sharing this awith us gooooooooood luck in the contest.... ily


  • the charmed one
    September 17
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    great poem .. thank you for entering . and good luck